My preliminary task was characterised as good by others because;
- Of the added outtakes to the end of it
-The title sequence was very effective and fit well with the given genre
-commercial comedy made sense to the audience
-Camera angles added variety
-Titles were professional
-The transitions between shots
-Good costumes and acting
- Sound effects were used well
What aspects could have been improved;
-Some parts were too long
-Some close ups were fuzzy and can be shot cleaner
-Continuity was an issue
-Change of setting
-Overlap in some shots
-Sound needs to be clearer